Constructive Criticism for Classmates

SARAH:
  1.) Major Argument: I think the major argument is trying to develop an identity for the Vocal Accord group on campus.
   2.) Strength: She has good skills, the logos don't look "homeade", they have a lot of potential
   3.) Develop: I really like the second one, I do think the colors need to be picked wisely or it will be hard to follow with the lines, etc.

CHARLIE:
   1.) Major argument: Recruiting for club indigo. Argument is that there is food, entertainment & social interaction
   2.)Strength: I like the layout of the slides, the variation in transitions
   3.)Develop: Definitely add pictures, will add a lot to the presentation

THIRD:
   1.) Major Argument: To show you the effects of the economy & the personal consequences of music piracy
   2.) Strength: The information is good, the colors are clear
   3.) Develop: The layout could use a little bit so it is easier to read. My head was spinning a little trying to decide what to read first
 
CASSANDRA:
   1.) Major Argument: To show you what goes on in "Greek Life", and all the opportunities you can get
   2.) Strength: The information is short & concise, but it fits everything in
   3.) Develop: clear up some of the fonts/colors, it gets distracting